My writing homework

**MRT Train**


It was a beautiful and sunny day , Ali and Tom went to MRT train at bedok . Inside the MRT train , it was very noisy because there was many commuters.


At the meanwhile , two school chidren were pushing and shoving each other at MRT train , their behaviour were very bad.


Suddenly , one of the boy wanted to eat his sandwich , but the boy's mother told him no food and drink allowed . She pointed the sign to her son !


Be a responsible citizen , we must keep the MRT train clean.


Ali and Tom were enjoyed their MRT trip .

(96words)

Bye bye

happy

hi

I m eagleliau

I swam with my mum this morning

I feel very happy and gleeful

my mum love me , I love my mumtoo

my mum is teaching me learning mother tongue and math !

Do a lot of tuition homeworks

very tired and angry

I play piano very well , and learning a new song "long long ago" , "mickey waltz" , "auld lang syne".

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Tuesday

Hi ,

I m eagleliau

I and my family went to Pulau Ubin yesterday !

I and my sister were fell down when we cycling .

I picked up a big durian , Birdie also !

we were enjoyed our trip .

every Tuesday and Thursday , I have tuition class !

I have many homeworks .

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Upset

Hi ,

I m eagleliau

I feel very angry and upset because I was scolded by my mother tongue teacher on Friday.

mdm Tam is a hard working teacher , she is very tired and angry because we are noisy and naughty !

I love mdm Tan and mdm Wong so much , I must a good and clever pupil .

I was noticed and realised my lovely pet baby pinky becomes fat and more cute !

my mother wants open new shop , we are very busy now .

I also love my new pet - pinky and my family !

bye bye

(94 words)

haha

Hi ,

I m eagleliau

I swam with my mother this morning.

I love swam with my mother

I love my mother because she care about me

I m lion-hearted because I saw "death note"

and Lucas is my favour star because he likes to eat apple in the movie

he is a death god !

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DAY

Hi ,

I m eagleliau

I can do better at SA1 exam !!

because I will get 10/10 in my spelling

haha...

I love my mother and my mother love me too.

I played chess with my mother this morning , I won and my mother got 0/2 .

I got 2/2 !

pinky is very cute and fat

did Jerry feeling better now ?

did Denny looks good ?

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gleeful

Hi,

I m eagleliau

I went to swam with my mother this morning .

Jeremy and his mother came to my house just now .

my mother is feels happy and gleeful because I do my homework by myself yesterday !

my father bought beautiful flower and delicious cake for my beautiful mother .

I love my beautiful mother , my nice father , my lovely sister and cute pinky !

And my beautiful mdm wong and mdm tan too !

jerry and denny -- I love u ^o^

bye bye