My writing homework

**MRT Train**


It was a beautiful and sunny day , Ali and Tom went to MRT train at bedok . Inside the MRT train , it was very noisy because there was many commuters.


At the meanwhile , two school chidren were pushing and shoving each other at MRT train , their behaviour were very bad.


Suddenly , one of the boy wanted to eat his sandwich , but the boy's mother told him no food and drink allowed . She pointed the sign to her son !


Be a responsible citizen , we must keep the MRT train clean.


Ali and Tom were enjoyed their MRT trip .

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happy

hi

I m eagleliau

I swam with my mum this morning

I feel very happy and gleeful

my mum love me , I love my mumtoo

my mum is teaching me learning mother tongue and math !

Do a lot of tuition homeworks

very tired and angry

I play piano very well , and learning a new song "long long ago" , "mickey waltz" , "auld lang syne".

bye bye

Tuesday

Hi ,

I m eagleliau

I and my family went to Pulau Ubin yesterday !

I and my sister were fell down when we cycling .

I picked up a big durian , Birdie also !

we were enjoyed our trip .

every Tuesday and Thursday , I have tuition class !

I have many homeworks .

bye bye

Upset

Hi ,

I m eagleliau

I feel very angry and upset because I was scolded by my mother tongue teacher on Friday.

mdm Tam is a hard working teacher , she is very tired and angry because we are noisy and naughty !

I love mdm Tan and mdm Wong so much , I must a good and clever pupil .

I was noticed and realised my lovely pet baby pinky becomes fat and more cute !

my mother wants open new shop , we are very busy now .

I also love my new pet - pinky and my family !

bye bye

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