Thursday, May 29, 2008

My writing homework



















**MRT Train**


It was a beautiful and sunny day , Ali and Tom went to MRT train at bedok . Inside the MRT train , it was very noisy because there was many commuters.


At the meanwhile , two school chidren were pushing and shoving each other at MRT train , their behaviour were very bad.


Suddenly , one of the boy wanted to eat his sandwich , but the boy's mother told him no food and drink allowed . She pointed the sign to her son !


Be a responsible citizen , we must keep the MRT train clean.


Ali and Tom were enjoyed their MRT trip .



(96words)



Bye bye

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